Score: 8

"hey"

submission: Crotchless Chaps

date: August 14, 2009

I give you 8/10.

Purely for the grahics, they were nice, good lipsyncing.

Im thinking it was a big mistake to voice everything yourself.

Mainly because it was pretty flat. You should have got women for the women.

I get voice actors to voice mine for free, its pretty easy to get it done, just look up voice actors on google and send them a polite email asking them nicely.

I think if you write better scripts and get the voices done, you could turn this into a tv show.

Dont get me wrong it was amusing, but i didnt laugh once.

Score: 5

"worked for me"

submission: Shooting Stars

date: June 17, 2009

but you should have made it so things could kill you.
otherwise its kind of pointless.

good effort for what you were trying to do.

Score: 5

"Could be better"

submission: Shoot or Die

date: June 17, 2009

The first level i had to shoot every single one - there was no way of knowing which one you were meant to shoot.

The poor instructions didn't help.

Score: 10

"Stunning."

submission: GunChest Episode 08_02

date: January 7, 2009

Animation - Professional.

Story - Original.

This shit should be on TV.

Props to you for making it.

10/10

Score: 10

"i think this is my 2nd review?"

submission: Rent a Ninja

date: September 12, 2008

I came back for a 2nd viewing...

the people saying 'crap' voices were crap animation was crap...

you're all $%#$ #$%#@$%

the voices are meant to sound like its computer talkany program ... its called taking the piss out of the people who use those programs.

the animation was deliberately bad in some areas... this guy is obviously capable of doing better... i think.

this was a great example of perfectly timed comedy - and thats why its on the front page

Score: 8

"hey not bad mate"

submission: Ballon shooter

date: September 11, 2008

props to your first game - its clean and simple.

um... you might want to check out the end game screen.

it says

sponsors logo - im thinking you were meant to put a logo in there?

nm you didnt lose any points for it.

maybe next time have it level based?

a less annoying and/or varied balloon pop sound
also turn the volume down on it?

I like it 8/10

Score: 10

"l liked it a lot"

submission: don't watch this

date: September 6, 2008

in future add this actionscript to the last frame

stop();

replay_button.onRelease = function(){
gotoAndPlay("start"); //add a frame label start @ the start.
}

then create a movieclip - instance name replay_button

vwala. your movie wont loop and make you look like a flash noob...

love the animation btw :)

Score: 10

"You should seriously think about making this...."

submission: Messed-Up Bible Stories 3

date: September 2, 2008

Into a TV show...
Good comedy, voice, animation...
Just put them all together onto a DVD and send it to a TV network...

wait get an industry rep first... otherwise the networks will rip you off.

Score: 5

"pretty good animating for a piece of crap flash."

submission: hard core techno kitty

date: July 28, 2008

i definately see some animating potential...

frame by frame is the hardest and you pulled it off.

clean it up, think about writing a story.

Score: 9

"gotoAndPlay - semi colon semi colon!"

submission: Blockhead: Quick Shot 2

date: July 28, 2008

I just finished my first game too, for marc m of sick animation . com...

did my head in, i was that guy... stupid flash doesnt understand its only language... well it might... probably does... shut up!

nice cartoon, you've gotten consistently better each animation...

cant wait to see your stuff on TV