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nice

i know that you go the technique of the lighting somewhere else...
but you did it well. it looked original... and the inside of the card that was looked good, ive been trying to do that myself recently and you did it badly but looked really good. maybe ive been trying too hard!

ive also been starting a sound track too... i'll keep ya posted.

that was fucking hilarious!

dont listen to what those tools are saying about how much you suck...
thats animation had me in tears for most of it!
i actually really like the ultimate showdown ... but i think i like this more... the ultimate showdown is clever lyrics funny this is funny is the comedic sense of the word.
nice job im gunna go watch it again.... 5/5!

that was gold.

asking for money! that was a sweet idea.. i would have given you a dollar if i had a paypal account... please tell me how much you make! seriously... please email me.

omg could that have been more annoying?

next time your going to use annoying sounds for the background... instead of looping them in an annoying way. get audacity and make it one long stream. and that beeping was really annoying!

you took 20 seconds to move a stupid ship.

the only good part is the opening line.

this is based on events that may happen in the future.

other then that... what about the bloody voices! they werent' even voices they were computers... and the lip syncing wheres the lipsyncing!

www . keyframer . com

this is an awesome site with some mad tutorials down the bottom left of the page. they teach character movement and lipsyncing and 2 and half d animation.

next time if you cant sit through a part of it over and over and over without saying this is really shitting me. dont put it in.

good luck!

Hmm i smell a rat

I have an overwhelming feeling that you took a dancing person. and frame by frame traced that fucker and stuck it into a flash doco and called it animation.

anyway...i think iwas on the verge of an epileptic fit when i closed the window early... watch out for that... you could get into trouble.

you guys always have good timing.

so much effort goes into these pointless animation... but they're always so funny that i can overlook that!

good graphics - good voices - good lipsyncing.

maybe go a bit longer.

was good. the wolf needed to learn how to walk

it seems as some points some of the motions could have taken more time to finish. the part where the rabbit ran into the log, the wolf could have bent forward and down, you had the body parts to do it.

and at the end, the wolf should have been walking on an angle up the hill not like a nintendo game.

it was pretty good. nice little story, but the wolf was never challenged to survive defying the title.

you have improved since your last one, which i just watch, it was so painful. so so painful.

good luck with the future!

OxSox responds:

Yeah I tried both your ideas and liked the look of neither of them, perhapes I should've been more perseverant? Well there's always my next flash. And yeah there's no need to remind me about my first flash...

that was funny as hell

so fast. good humour. only good things...

arhh maybe the suicidal ending was a bit much but hey...

0-The-Dark-0 responds:

Read all of the text. In the middle of the 'angst' it says 'I like pokemon'. it was just a joke ending.

i would have given you a higher score if...

you had only submitted the opening and the end...

those credits are really good.

movie/tv calibre credits... but the rest sucked arse :P

i mean the graphics were terrible, there was 0 animation.. so to say that someone was given the animators title is absurd.

anyway... good credits... crap movie. :P

that was better then my first attempt

that wasnt that bad... ok script. so many people submit crap that just doesnt have any story...

excellent walk cycles! :P

but yeah it does seem like it was done by a kid.

just because it doesnt fit my 'expectations of animation'

doesnt mean it wasnt good. keep it up. just get more technical and better story's.

TheMentalInstitute responds:

Thanks... I guess...

I am a kid... or at least mentally...

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